SparkyValentine86's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[wizard duel pilot]

Awesome to the max yo

I really liked this flash. You have a really well-defined sense of style. You remind me of the guy who did Gordon vs. Evil. I know the last guy asked this already, but is this fbf? It was a really great animation. The one improvement I could suggest would be to add some kind of sound. Don't get me wrong, the music was awesome, but I always like sound effects. Still, this is the best flash I have seen in a while.

Cesarean-Pizza responds:

i agree it does need sound but i do not have any sound files ill get some though
this is the pilot, so i just want to get feed back for the upcomming cartoons.

[LOTRP]

It was OK

You are pretty good with the artwork side of it. But the sound and animation was really bad. You might want to adjust the levels on your mic and/or sound recording software. You can barely hear most of the dialogue. I would also recommend you spend some time with the tutorial section of newgrounds; there were places where your animation was kinda weak. Plus, there's some really cool effects you can do to make your artwork.animation better, like make fire for the eye of Sauron and stuff like that. And wtf was going on with smeagol's head?

[Guy from the Sky]

Alien totem pole pwns all

I really liked this flash. You have a definate sense of style, very stylistic. I love it when people use a relativly simple artwork scheme effectively. Your artwork was very asthetically pleasing. My one suggestion would be to add sound effects. You can find free ones all over the internet. Without promoted an outside website, my favorite one starts with an "F" and ends with a "lashkit-dot-com." It works with or without sound, and I do love your background music.

[Street Fighters]

Good claymation for a noobie

It was OK. The technical aspect of the claymation were pretty good. I've seen a lot worse on it. The sound was sorta lame in that the voice acting could be a lot better and the music was random, but not random enough to be funny. Try doing articulation excersized before doing voice work. And I'd work on more of a plot.

[Headache Man Ep.4]

That was fantastico!

Dude, I liked it a lot. Your art was kinda hit or miss but I liked it. It reminded me of the Beebo guy even before you did the awesome tribute. The one improvement I'd suggest is you get the artwork better. You can clearly work around the style you do have, but you could make truly epic flashes if the artwork was better. I'm not saying I didn't love your flash though!!! It was great. If you were a girl I would totally marry you.

WilliWowza responds:

Thanks man, I'm getting alot of feedback about how the graphics could be improved, which is what I'll work on for my next flash, hopefully it'll be able to keep the same humour.

[Vietnam Recruitment Tape]

That totally gave me a flash-gasm

Dude, I'm just curious, what grade did you get on the assignment.

[oompa loopa fun]

Worse than B.

Dude, wtf? It sorta moved so I guess it's technically an animation. But seriously. Don't put this on the portal. It needs, a plot, actual animation, humor, etc...

It was so bad I think it gave me cancer.

[Japan]

It wasn't as bad as you said it would be

I've seen worse. Seen better too. The animation was good. It felt like a school report on Japan. It was competant animation but not entertaining.

THE INTERNET ISN'T A BIG TRUCK. YOU DON'T JUST DUMP STUFF ON IT. IT'S A SERIES OF TUBES!!!

[StagBeetle Goes to Africa]

You're new at this, right?

Hey dude, are you kinda new at flash? It was way too short. No plot whatsoever. It looks like a lot of work went into that one frame, but nothing happened. Also, you might want to do mousehide, "Mouse.hide()" without the quotation marks, once the movie starts. The stag bettle kinda gets in the way.

StagBeetle responds:

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[Gordon vs. Evil]

You have a great sense of who you are as an artist

I really enjoyed that flash. You did a really nice job of really making the animation flow. You didn't overdo the artwork, which produced a really nice effect. The sound really fit the piece well. Good one!

Skaijo responds:

Geez, thanks a bunch. It was pretty easy not overdoing the artwork when I didn't know how to do anything. :P

I really appreciate the love.